Question

【題目】短文改錯

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改，每句中最多有兩處。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practiced. A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】make---makes

【2】unless---if

【3】found---found it

【4】feel---felt

【5】them---it

【6】succeed---success

【7】A day---One day

【8】sudden--suddenly

【9】exciting---excited

【10】much more better---much better

【解析】

【1】make---makes 考查主謂一致。此處的主語是Practice，為單數(shù)，應該用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故make---makes。

【2】unless---if 考查連詞。此處是if引導的條件從句，故unless---if。

【3】found---found it 考查的用法。found it 直接加形容詞表示發(fā)現(xiàn)......，故found---found it。

【4】feel---felt 考查時態(tài)。此處講述的是過去的事，應該用過去時態(tài)。故feel---felt。

【5】them---it 考查代詞。good at it擅長....，句意：然后我看著其他人很擅長，并問他們成功的關鍵。故them---it。

【6】succeed---success 考查名詞。此處指的是成功的鑰匙，應該用名詞形式。故succeed---success。

【7】A day---One day 考查固定用法。One day有朝一日;有一天，故A day---One day。

【8】sudden--suddenly 考查副詞。此處修飾found，應該用副詞形式。故sudden--suddenly。

【9】exciting---excited 考查詞性。此處修飾人，應該用excited，exciting表示令人激動的；故exciting---excited。

【10】much more better---much better 考查固定用法。句意：現(xiàn)在我游得比以前好多了。much better：好多了；好得多。故much more better---much better 。