Question

【題目】你校文學(xué)社向高三學(xué)生征文，請(qǐng)你以“How to Realize my Dream to University”為主題寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 理想的大學(xué)和專業(yè)；

2. 目前的做法；

3. 未來(lái)的打算。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Realize my Dream to University

I often imagine what university I will enter next year. To be honest, I do hope I can go to Beijing University to learn economics which I’ve dreamed of since I was a child.

As a matter of fact, I haven’t completely put into my heart into all subjects such as maths, physics. I often want to play games and don’t listen to my teachers carefully in class.

As a saying goes “No pains , no gains.” I do know if I really want to realize my dream to the university, I have to work hard at all subjects. From now on, I am determined to make full use of my time, attending my class attentively, reading wildly, completing all the homework and doing sports to keep healthy. I believe, only by working hard at all subjects can I make my dream come true.

【解析】

試題分析：對(duì)于談理想的文章，注意理想要積極向上，貼合實(shí)際，可以用To be honest，As a matter of fact，F(xiàn)rom now on等插入語(yǔ)增加文章的真實(shí)性課理想的可行性。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補(bǔ)充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I often imagine what university I will enter next year. what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；which I’ve dreamed of since I was a child. which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句；“No pains , no gains.”運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)；I do know if I really want to realize my dream to the university, if引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；only by working hard at all subjects can I make my dream come true. only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句等提高文章檔次；To be honest，As a matter of fact，F(xiàn)rom now on，I do hope，I have to，I am determined to，I believe等 表達(dá)自己的決心。As a saying goes作為開(kāi)頭，是文章更有水平。歸納的詞語(yǔ)：To be honest，dreamed of，As a matter of fact，put into，such as，listen to，As a saying goes “No pains , no gains.”， From now on，be determined to，keep healthy，make one’s dream come true

考點(diǎn):考查對(duì)談理想作文的寫作。