Question

19．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（︿），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從每11處起）不計(jì)分．
Most students go to Internet bars play video games，that takes much of their precious time．Some students even stayed in Internet bars day and night，forgot their studies．No doubt these students will finally end up with their bright future destroy．Furthermore，some student log onto unhealthy websites accidental．And they are finally absorbed to the excitement of reading unhealthy stories or watching dirty videos．All these are harmful to the teenagers and if only this is not controlled or the use of the Internet is not properly guided，some of us will go the wrong way．

Answer 1

分析 文章主要講述了一些青少年沉溺于網(wǎng)絡(luò)耽誤了學(xué)習(xí)，甚至有些人誤入歧途．

解答 Most students go to Internet bars∧play video games，that takes much of their precious time．Some students even stayed in Internet bars day and night，forgot their studies．No doubt these students will finally end up with their bright future destroy．Furthermore，some student log onto unhealthy websites accidental．And they are finally absorbed to the excitement of reading unhealthy stories or watching dirty videos．All these are harmful to the teenagers and if only this is not controlled or the use of the Internet is not properly guided，some of us will go the wrong way．
詳解：
1．在play前面加to；考查動(dòng)詞不定式，此處用不定式短語作目的狀語．
2．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代前面整個(gè)句子，在從句中作主語．
3．stayed改為stay；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文基本時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)陳述一個(gè)事實(shí)情況，主語Some students為復(fù)數(shù)，故用動(dòng)詞原形stay．
4．forgot改為forgetting；考查非謂語動(dòng)詞，主語some students與動(dòng)詞forget是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語． 
5．destroy改為destroyed；考查非謂語動(dòng)詞，their bright future 與動(dòng)詞destroy存在邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故用過去分詞形式表示被動(dòng)．
6．student改為students；考查名詞，student為可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．a(chǎn)ccidental改為accidentally；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語，修飾前面的動(dòng)詞log．
8．to改為in；考查介詞，be absorbed in 是固定搭配，意為"專心致志于…"．
9．去掉only；考查連詞，if only 用于虛擬語氣，表示"要是…就好了"，if意為"如果"，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，根據(jù)句意"如果這種現(xiàn)象不被控制…"，要把only去掉．
10．us改為them；考查人稱代詞，分析句意為"他們當(dāng)中有些人將會(huì)誤入歧途"，故用代詞them．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1．快速閱讀，整體把握短文大意．2．重視語境以及上下文的關(guān)系．3．充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出錯(cuò)誤所在．