Question

【題目】2015年兩會前夕，原中央臺記者柴靜自費制作的關于環(huán)境污染的紀錄片《穹頂之下》引起強烈反響。假如你是李華，請用英語給21世紀英文報寫一封信，表達你的觀點。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 闡述柴靜所做的事對我們生活的影響；

2. 面臨環(huán)境污染我們能做些什么。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did. ____________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did. The movie has aroused the public’s environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration.

Thanks to the movie, I’m strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment.

I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take effective measures to protect our environment from being polluted. For instance, we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling. Obviously, the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission. Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome. We do need the immediate change.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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