【題目】假如你是李華,現(xiàn)在你寫一封信告訴你的外國朋友Peter如何保持健康,要點(diǎn)如下

1.健康對我們?nèi)魏稳藖碚f都是最為重要的;

2.注意你的飲食,均衡飲食;

3.鍛煉是必要的;

4.要養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣,不抽煙,多休息。

注意:詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

I am writing to you to tell you something about health.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to you to tell you something about health.Health is the most important thing for us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

Firstly, pay attention to the diet.We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables,because they are rich in fiber and low in fat.Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat,such as butter.Don’t drink too much coffee,either.

Secondly, exercise is necessary.Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat.People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.

Finally, form good living habits.We should sleep for about 8 hours at night,and never work too hard.What’s more, stay away from cigarettes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息寫一封信告訴你的外國朋友Peter如何保持健康,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,要弄清題意,確定文章的要點(diǎn):健康對我們?nèi)魏稳藖碚f都是最為重要的.注意你的飲食.均衡飲食.鍛煉是必要的.要養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣.不抽煙,多休息幾個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、列出簡單的提綱,安排好層次段落,鋪設(shè)好過渡,處理好開頭和結(jié)尾。3、注意句式要靈活多變,使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).

亮點(diǎn)分析:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明。連接詞“firstly…secondly…finally”等的使用,使整個(gè)文章連貫,前后表達(dá)渾然一體。在句中大量地運(yùn)用了一些較高級的詞匯如“pay attention to,be rich in,What's more,stay away from,句式較為靈活多變,簡單與復(fù)合句相結(jié)合,并運(yùn)用了非謂語等,增添了文章的可讀性。文章中運(yùn)用的復(fù)合句如下:

賓語從句:I am writing to you to tell you something about health.

動詞不定式作狀語:In order to stay healthy,we need some common knowledge.

狀語從句:We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables,because they are rich in fiber and low in fat.

定語從句:Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat

定語從句:People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.

祈使句:form good living habits

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