Question

第二卷

第四部分  寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）

短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

     2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir or Madame,

I’m very glad to be invited to an English summer camp.                 

I prefer to going in July because I’ll have to prepare ourselves for the new school term in August. It seemed that all the activities       you offer are attract and meaningful. But after have a discussion with my parents, I’ve decided to attend the English lectures, from them I can get more information on British and American culture. As a large group international people working, living or traveling in our country, communication becomes very important.I hope to teach foreigner Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

Thank you very much.

                                                                                           Yours truly,

                                                            Li Ping

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madame,

I’m very glad to be invited to an English summer camp.                 

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I prefer to going in July because I’ll have to prepare ourselves for the new school

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term in August. It seemed that all the activities you offer are attract and meaningful.

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But after have a discussion with my parents, I’ve decided to attend the English

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lectures, from them I can get more information on British and American culture.

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communication becomes very important.I hope to teach foreigner Chinese and spread

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Chinese culture.

         

Thank you very much.

                                                                             Yours truly,

                                       Li Ping