Question

10．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
The winter holiday is coming，which made me excited．（76）made改為makesI have been looking forward at relaxing myself．I'd like（77）at改為toto go skating，climb mountains and see several movie．（78）movie改為moviesI think I can play the basketball with my classmates．（79）the去掉What wonderful a time I'll have during the winter holiday!（80）What改為HowHowever，my parents think different．They don't want （81）different改為differentlyme go out．They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck，（82）加tofall off a tree，or fight with others．Besides，they are afraid （83）√I will lose my way．I hate being treated like a bird keeping in （84）keeping改為kepta cage．To get more freedom，so I will try to persuade them．（85）so去掉．

Answer 1

分析 寒假就要來了，我很激動(dòng)．一直盼望可以放松一下，我想去滑雪，爬山，看電影．還可以和同學(xué)打籃球，多開心�。∪欢�，我的父母可不這樣想．他們不讓我出去，擔(dān)心我會(huì)被車撞到，會(huì)從樹上摔下來，或者是和別人打架．我不喜歡自己像一只籠子里的小鳥，為了自由，我要說服他們．

解答 The winter holiday is coming，which made me excited．
                                                      makes
I have been looking forward at relaxing myself．I'd like 
                                        to              
to go skating，climb mountains and see several movie．
                                                                     movies
I think I can play the basketball with my classmates．
                          去掉
What wonderful a time I'll have during the winter holiday!
How
However，my parents think different．They don't want               
                                          differently
me∧go out．They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck，
   加to
fa11 off a tree，or fight with others．Besides，they are afraid       
     
I will lose my way．I hate being treated like a bird keeping in        
                                                                          kept
a cage．To get more freedom，so I will try to persuade them．
                                            去掉
1．made改為makes．完整講述的一般事實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
2．a(chǎn)t改為to．短語搭配，look forward to盼望．
3．movie改為movies．句意表達(dá)的是幾部電影，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
4．the去掉．球類運(yùn)動(dòng)前不用冠詞．
5．What改為How．句中wonderful是形容詞，要用how來修飾．
6．different改為differently．句中是修飾動(dòng)詞think，要用副詞．
7．加to．短語搭配，want sb to do sth想要某人做某事．
8．正確．
9．keeping改為kept．句中keep是作bird的后置定語，兩者之間構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用表示被動(dòng)的過去分詞．
10．so去掉．這是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，不需要連詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．