Question

【題目】這是你學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)最近在全校高中學(xué)生中進(jìn)行的一次“你是否在上課時(shí)記筆記？”的調(diào)查。你作為校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)用英語將調(diào)查的情況寫成一篇短文刊登在校報(bào)上。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

調(diào)查范圍和對(duì)象	全體高中學(xué)生，共2105人
調(diào)查結(jié)果	55%的學(xué)生記筆記，他們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)都較好
	45%的學(xué)生沒記筆記，其中有的人認(rèn)為課堂上認(rèn)真聽講比記筆記更重要，有的想記筆記但不知如何下手，他們迫切需要老師的幫助。
你對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的看法	教師應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)學(xué)生課堂做筆記的能力

【寫作要求】

只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently a survey on “Do you take notes in class?” has been carried out among all the 2015 senior students in our school. According to the survey, 55% of the students surveyed often take notes in class, which helps to get their studies improved. However, 45% of them don’t take notes, some of whom think that listening to the teacher attentively is much more important than taking notes in class. Others want to take notes, but they can’t for lack of the skill so they are badly in need of help fro teachers. As far as I am concerned, since so many students don’t know how to take notes properly, teachers are supposed to focus more on improving students’ skill of taking notes so as to help them make greater progress in study.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文，根據(jù)提示信息和表格來討論“上課是否記筆記”這一問題。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、表格是文章的總體框架，要在表格所提供的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了高級(jí)句式。比如which helps to get their studies improved.和some of whom think that listening to the teacher attentively is much more important than taking notes in class.是非限制性定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語According to the survey；for lack of；in need of；As far as I am concerned；are supposed to；focus more on；make greater progress等。這些高級(jí)詞匯短語或句型的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。