18.假定你是李華,你校攝影俱樂部(photography ciub)將舉辦國際中學(xué)生攝影展,請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信,請(qǐng)他提供作品,信的內(nèi)容包括:1、主題:環(huán)境保護(hù);2、展覽時(shí)間;3、投稿郵箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.(介紹主題)It will start from June15th and last three weeks.(高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文,你校攝影俱樂部(photography club)將舉辦國際中學(xué)攝影展.請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,注意要適當(dāng)拓展,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化.
高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.
該句使用了who引導(dǎo)定語從句,修飾先行詞students;
(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.
該句the last time相當(dāng)于一個(gè)連詞短語,連接兩個(gè)并列句;

解答 Dear Peter,
      Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School students Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.(介紹主題)It will start from June15th and last three weeks.(高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
       Hope to hear from you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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