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短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分；滿分10分）

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Jack,

I am terrible sorry that I won’t be able to go to your birthday party this Saturday afternoon.

So yesterday my mother didn’t feel better and I took her to the hospital. The doctor suggest that she should have an operation immediately. I have to look after her in the hospital for a few day. I sincerely hope something will go well and that you can have happy birthday party. By the way, I have sent to you the latest CD of Jay Chou as a birthday gift. I know you are a fan of Jan Chou and I hope he will enjoy it.

I am looking forward to see you soon.

【答案】

【1】terrible改為terribly

【2】so 改為because

【3】better改為well

【4】suggest改為suggested

【5】day改為days

【6】something改為everything

【7】have和happy之間加 a

【8】刪掉sent之后的to

【9】he改為you

【10】see改為seeing

【解析】

【1】terrible改為terribly考查副詞的使用。terribly，在這里用于修飾形容詞sorry，起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用，故改為terribly。

【2】so 改為because考查連詞的使用。根據(jù)文中，yesterday my mother didn’t feel better and I took her to the hospital，可知因?yàn)槟赣H生病我需要照顧她而不能去晚會，這是對前面提到不能去的原因，應(yīng)用because連接，故改為because。

【3】better改為well考查系表結(jié)構(gòu)。feel意為“感覺”，是系動詞，后面跟表語，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。better不能做標(biāo)表語，這利用程度副詞well代表一種狀態(tài)，故改為well。

【4】suggest改為suggested考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前文可知，媽媽生病這件事發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故改為suggested。

【5】day改為days考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。a few 意為“一些”后面接名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故改為days。

【6】something改為everything 考查不定代詞的使用。something常常用于否定句和疑問句中，這句話是一般陳述句，應(yīng)用everything，故改為everything。

【7】have和happy之間加 a 考查冠詞。后面的名詞party，是單數(shù)名詞，have是不及物動詞，應(yīng)用不定代詞a，表示泛指一個(gè)快樂的生日晚會，故添加a。

【8】刪掉sent之后的to 考查短語。send sb. sth.意為“送某人某物”，是固定用法，故去掉to。

【9】he改為you考查主語。and前后主語一致，根據(jù)前文可知這份禮物的主語是you，所以應(yīng)該是祝你快樂，同時(shí)全文以第二人稱書寫，故改為you。

【10】see改為seeing考查固定用法。look forward to doing是固定用法，意為“期望做某事”，故改為seeing。

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