Question

10．假設你是張華，班里從美國轉來一名同學Mike，他無法理解同學們經常談論的"網絡交友"，感到很苦惱．請根據下列要點用英語給他寫封信，信中須包括：
1．幫他分析網絡交友的利弊；
2．指出解決網絡交友欺騙的方法．
注意：
1．詞數120左右．信的開頭和結尾已寫好，不計人總詞數；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new Class．
…
Best regards．
Yours truly，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息班里從美國轉來一名同學Mike，他無法理解同學們經常談論的"網絡交友"，感到很苦惱．請根據下列要點用英語給他寫封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：幫他分析網絡交友的利弊；指出解決網絡交友欺騙的方法． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：laugh at 嘲笑；in my opinion 在我看來；make friends 交朋友；all over the world 全世界；every coin has two sides 事有利弊；take measures 采取措施；adapt to 適應；as soon as possible 盡快
I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）
Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
　　I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new class．I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）Such a kind-hearted girl was cheated and laughed at by the cheat．She wanted to help the boy，but what the boy said was a trap．
　　In my opinion，making friends on line is a good way to communicate with people from all over the world．However，every coin has two sides．When people try to make friends on line，they have to be very careful and cautious．Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
　　To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）As for those Internet users，they should be cautious when making friends on line．
　　I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
　　Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                Zhang Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．