Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活(low­carbon life)；節(jié)能(energy saving)
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
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Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to excise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇以“Let's Ride Bicycles”為主題的演講稿。演講稿主要分兩部分：敘述空氣污染等問題；騎自行車的好處。作文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，必須用上參考詞匯。用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，注意拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)要規(guī)范，卷面整潔；多使用高級(jí)詞匯和語法知識(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用As is known to all, However, also, As far as I am concerned, For one thing, For another, What’s more, Therefore等來銜接前后句和上下文，使作文顯得語意連貫、行文流暢；
范文使用了一些較為重要的語法知識(shí)：with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with the improvement of people’s living standards；非謂語動(dòng)詞bringing great convenience to our life；動(dòng)名詞作主語riding bicycles is a good solution；原因狀語從句because they won’t give off waste gas等，語法知識(shí)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，語法功底扎實(shí)；
范文還使用了一些短語和固定搭配：such as，give off，build up，a good way for us to excise，it is beneficial to our health，take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city等，使文章內(nèi)容顯得充實(shí)。