Question

16．手機(jī)給我們帶來很多便利的同時(shí)也帶來了越來越多的"低頭族"，請(qǐng)你描述這種現(xiàn)象及其危害；并發(fā)表你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．低頭族phubbers，低頭族現(xiàn)象phubbing．
Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life．However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street．They never care about what happens around．
As far as I am concerned，the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages．First，it does harm to people's health，especially their eyes．Besides，phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street．What's more，in some occasions，such as at dinner table，phubbing seems impolite to others．
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street
然而，越來越多的人，尤其是年輕人，要盯住屏幕隨時(shí)隨地的，不管他們是乘公共汽車，吃在餐桌上或走在街上．
高分句型二：
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing．
總之，人們應(yīng)該利用好手機(jī)而不是沉迷于手機(jī)．

解答 Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life．However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street（高分句型一）．They never care about what happens around．
As far as I am concerned，the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages．First，it does harm to people's health，especially their eyes．Besides，phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street．What's more，in some occasions，such as at dinner table，phubbing seems impolite to others．
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．