Question

以“Smoking”為題目寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)100左右，內(nèi)容要求包括：
1、現(xiàn)狀：中國(guó)吸煙者約占總?cè)丝诘囊话�，吸煙者越�?lái)越年輕，甚至有少數(shù)中學(xué)生也在抽煙。
2、原因：有的人認(rèn)為是時(shí)髦（a kind of fashion），有的人認(rèn)為是樂(lè)趣，有的人認(rèn)為可以提神（refresh oneself）。
3、害處：吸煙有害健康，可導(dǎo)致多種疾病，是一種金錢(qián)的浪費(fèi)。
4、勸告大家不要吸煙。
                                                                     
                                                                      
                                                                     

Answer 1

                   Smoking
Smoking is bad for people’s health. There are more than half people smoking in China. Even though smoking is very bad, the number of smokers keeps growing, and the average age of the smokers is getting younger. Even some students smoke, too. Why do so many people smoke today? Because some people think smoking is a kind of fashion or something interesting. Most people are so busy with their work that they smoke to fresh themselves; however, I don’t think smoking is good. If you smoke too much, you will get diseases. It also costs a lot of money. In order to keep healthy, we should not smoke.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文寫(xiě)作，文章的討論話題是吸煙。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了，考生只需要翻譯成中文即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要變換使用多種句式，使文章充滿變化，不那么乏味。同時(shí)要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和合適的連接詞，把文章連接成一個(gè)整體，更為流暢。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的話題是考生十分熟悉的抽煙�？忌�也有話可說(shuō)，給出的要點(diǎn)也比較全面，用連接詞把各要點(diǎn)翻譯成中文即可。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)仍然要注意作文三大法寶：連接詞，高級(jí)詞匯詞組，和高級(jí)的句型句式。