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【題目】現(xiàn)在的孩子由于被父母管教，呵護太多，漸漸失去一些自我管理和生活能力。當獨自一個人時就會難以自律，甚至?xí)�加劇一些不良�?xí)慣。假如你一個人在家時，你覺得你該怎樣做才能有利于自己的成長？請以Alone at home為題寫一篇短文。

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1．內(nèi)容需涵蓋2-3個具體做法。

2．字數(shù)：120左右。

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【答案】Alone at homeAt present，most parents are worried a lot about their children，so they care about them too much．Under the parents’ control，the children have lost interest in many things．When we are at home，we often lose control of ourselves，so our parents will feel more worried and promise never to let us alone at home．To comfort our parents，what should we do while alone at home？In fact，there is a lot interesting to do except surfing on the Internet，playing games and so on．In my opinion，we should read books and do our homework first．Then，we may listen to some music and read some books and newspapers．Also，we can take some exercise to keep fit．I believe that if we do so，our parents will give us more free time and never be worried about our being alone at home．

【解析】本文主要從父母對孩子管制太多以致于不敢讓孩子單獨呆在家里入手，引出孩子在家應(yīng)該做些什么以讓父母放心。第二段作者提出了自己的觀點，單獨一人在家應(yīng)該做些什么，多做些有益身心成長的事情，這樣父母就不會再為孩子擔(dān)心了。文中使用了under the control of，keep fit等高級短語；也使用了our being alone at home動名詞短語作賓語；還使用了believe的賓語從句，從句中又加入了if條件句；還使用四次了不定式等等，充分說明該作者深厚的語言功底。