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17．假設(shè)你校英語社團舉辦以"講求文明，從我做起"為主題的征文活動，請你以"On the Way to School"為題，寫一篇英語短文．
內(nèi)容主要包括：1）遵守交通法規(guī)；
2）注意舉止文明．
注意：1）詞數(shù)120左右；
2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
4）短文的題目已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)．These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment．Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone．As for me，it should start on the way to school．
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way．If I ride a bicycle，I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green．If I walk，I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing． Meanwhile，I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy．Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere，I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible． I hope my behavior will make a difference．．

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，以"On the Way to School"為題，內(nèi)容主要包括：1）遵守交通法規(guī)； 2）注意舉止文明，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時應(yīng)以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．重要短語：cause harm to（對…造成傷害），as for （關(guān)于），keep sth in mind （把…記在心里），keep to（堅持，遵守），make a difference（有影響，起作用）．

解答 These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment．【高分句型】Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone．As for me，it should start on the way to school．
       I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way．If I ride a bicycle，I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green．If I walk，I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing．（遵守交通法規(guī)）Meanwhile，I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy．Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere，I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible．【高分句型】I hope my behavior will make a difference．（注意舉止文明）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．