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8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不 計(jì)分．
      Do you have cellphone？Do you like talking over the phone loudly in publicly？Yesterday，I went to school with a friend by bus．After I was sitting on the bus，a middle-aged  man came over and sat besides me．Ten minutes later．his  phone rang．I took it out and answered the call．To my  surprises，he talked loudly as if nobody was around．It was so  annoyed that some people turned around and looked into  him，but he didn't seem to mind it at a11．Talk over the phone  loudly in public isn't a good habit．I did hope such people  will change．

Answer 1

分析 在公眾場合接電話要注意影響，不能太大聲，建議這樣的人以后需要改變．

解答 Do you have∧cellphone？Do you like talking over the phone loudly inpublicly？Yesterday，I went to school with a friend by bus．After I was sitting on the bus，a middle-aged  man came over and sat besides me．Ten minutes later．his  phone rang．I took it out and answered the call．To my  surprises，he talked loudly as if nobody was around．It was so  annoyed that some people turned around and looked into  him，but he didn't seem to mind it at a11．Talk over the phone  loudly in public isn't a good habit．I did hope such people  will change．
1．在have后加a  考查冠詞． cellphone為手機(jī)，可數(shù)名詞，需要加冠詞．
2．publicly→public 考查名詞．在公開場合為固定短語 in public．
3．a(chǎn)fter→when 考查連接詞．根據(jù)句意此處是when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句．
4．besides→beside 考查介詞．在…旁邊是介詞beside．
5．i→he 考查代詞．根據(jù)上下文應(yīng)該是他接電話．
6．surprises→surprise 考查名詞，讓人感到驚訝的是to one's surprise．
7．a(chǎn)nnoyed→annoying 考查形容詞．此處是這件事情 令人惱火，annoyed是指人感到惱火的．
8．into→at 考查介詞．look at是固定短語，看．look  into是調(diào)查．
9．talk→talking 考查動(dòng)名詞．此處是作為句子的主語，所以用動(dòng)名詞形式．
10．did→do 考查時(shí)態(tài)，文章敘述一種現(xiàn)在的 感想，所以需用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

點(diǎn)評 解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．