【題目】結(jié)合你送出或收到禮物的經(jīng)歷,以The Best Gift為題,寫一篇詞數(shù)約100左右的文章。

The Best Gift

【答案】

Years ago, I received a gift from my friend on my birthday who is now living far away. It delighted me at the sight of it. It was a piece of paper cutting, a kind of Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several weeks to learn to make it. Thats why I value it more than any other gifts I receive that day.

Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I cant helping thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other.

So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.

【解析】

試題分析:本篇文章是一個開放式作文,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點。2、確定文章的總體框架,要在試題給出的立場的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本用了多樣詞組 3.文章行文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密,能夠結(jié)合自己的看法,具有現(xiàn)實意義 4.邏輯鮮明,思路清晰。在考場文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。1.本文文法簡單流暢,不拖泥帶說,句式多樣。 2.使上可謂一篇高分佳作。

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