【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加；在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除；把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意；1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Tom and Alice were both patient in a Mental Hospital. One day they were walking by the swimming pool of the hospital while Tom suddenly jumped into the deep end. He sank to the bottom. Alice promptly jumped in to save him with any hesitation. She swam to the bottom and pull him out. When the medical director became aware Alice’s heroic act, he immediate reviewed her file and called her into his office. “Alice, I have a good news and bad news for you. The good news is that you’re being discharged because since you were able to save the life of other patient, I think you’ve gained your senses. The bad news is that Tom, that you saved, hanged himself with his bathrobe（浴衣）belt in the bathroom, and he was dead.”

Alice replied, “He didn’t hang him. I hung him up to dry.”

【答案】

【1】patient改為patients

【2】while改為when

【3】with改為without

【4】pull改為pulled

【5】aware后面加of

【6】immediate改為immediately

【7】刪去good前面的a

【8】other改為another

【9】that改為whom/who

【10】him改為himself

【解析】

【1】patient改為patients；考查主謂一致，這一句的主語是Tom and Alice，是兩個(gè)人，并且patient是可數(shù)名詞。故將patient改為patients。

【2】while改為when；考查固定搭配：be doing …when當(dāng)…的時(shí)候，就。因?yàn)榍懊姘刖涫莣ere walking。故將while改為when。

【3】with改為without；句意：Alice promptly jumped in to save him with any hesitation.愛麗絲沒有任何猶豫地迅速的跳進(jìn)游泳池去救湯姆。without any hesitation毫不猶豫。故將with改為without。

【4】pull改為pulled；考查時(shí)態(tài)。結(jié)合前后文，整篇文章是以一般過去時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)在講述整個(gè)故事。故將pull改為pulled。

【5】aware后面加of；考查固定搭配：be aware of知道，了解。故將aware后面加of。

【6】immediate改為immediately；考查副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。immediate是形容詞，意為立刻的，馬上的。故將immediate改為immediately。

【7】刪去good前面的a；考查冠詞。因?yàn)閚ews是單復(fù)數(shù)同行的名詞。因此不需要冠詞。故刪去good前面的a。

【8】other改為another；other表示其他的時(shí)候，是沒有特定范圍的，但是這里表達(dá)的是其他的病人，實(shí)在病人這個(gè)特定的人群，所以不能用other。故將other改為another。

【9】you saved 前的that改為whom/who；考查定語從句。這一句的先行詞是Tom，是人，在從句中缺賓語，因此關(guān)系代詞可以填who或者whom。故將you saved前的that改為whom/who。

【10】hang后面的him改為himself；考查反身代詞。根據(jù)前文的hanged himself可知這里也應(yīng)該用himself。故將hang 后面的him改為himself。

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