Question

8．假設(shè)你是Peter Smith，請給學(xué)生會寫封建議書，并說出你建議的理由．
（附學(xué)生會的倡議書）
Dear Friends，
Spring is in the air on campus．Everything has come back to life．What should we do to add color to the surroundings？What is in your mind to change our dull school life？We are waiting for your suggestions．
                                           The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給學(xué)生會寫封建議書，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As is well-known to us all 眾所周知； is full of充滿了；make the most use of充分利用；make every effort  to 不遺余力；In a word，總之
   As is well-known to us all，the spring is coming．（高分句型一）
  As students，we should make every effort  to study hard and make our life colourful．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear the Students'Union，
      As is well-known to us all，the spring is coming．（高分句型一）The breeze is gently brushing our face．The blue sky is above us．After raining，the flowers are blooming in the garden．The living beings start to grow．Everything is full of  vigor and fragrance．The best season of this year，we can't miss it and we will love it．
　　The spring is coming，and it brings green to the trees and grass，pink and yellow to the flowers．The birds start to sing，the farmers begin to plant crops in the fields．In spring，everywhere is full of hope．People usually say that a good beginning is half done，while spring is the beginning of a year．So we should appreciate it and make the most use of it．As students，we should make every effort  to study hard and make our life colourful．（高分句型二）In a word，I hope that our life will be better and better in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours 
                                                                                                                                                                                 Peter Smith

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．