Question

7．假定你是李華，學校編輯部正在征集關(guān)于健康的英文稿件，你想就高中生近視問題投稿，具體要點如下：
1．簡述高中生近視現(xiàn)狀；
2．分析近視形成的原因（用眼方式/學習壓力/長時間看電視等）；
3．提出視力保護的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear editor，
My name is Li Hua．My topic today deals with the problem of near eyesight in students．
                                          
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于高中生近視問題的議論文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明話題；二簡述高中生近視現(xiàn)狀并且分析近視形成的原因；三提出視力保護的建議．
高分句型：
1．At present，an increasing number of students wear glasses and some even in high degree，which worries themselves a lot．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句．
目前，戴眼鏡的學生越來越多，有些甚至是高度近視，這讓他們很擔心．
2．Whenever we are free，we can do some eye exercises so that our tired eyes can be restored quickly．句子里Whenever 引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，表示"無論何時"；so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句，表示"為了"．
當我們空閑的時候，我們可以做眼保健操，這會讓我們勞累的眼睛很快恢復(fù)．

解答 Dear editor，
    My name is Li Hua．My topic today deals with the problem of near eyesight in students． （點明話題）
    At present，an increasing number of students wear glasses and some even in high degree，which worries themselves a lot．【高分句型一】In my opinion，there are mainly three reasons．First，their ways of using eyes are not healthy．Second，because of the high pressure of study，they often study without any break for too long．Third，some spend too much time in front of televisions or computers．（簡述高中生近視現(xiàn)狀并且分析近視形成的原因）
    However，much can be done to protect your eyesight．When reading，make sure you are in bright places and let your eyes rest every hour．Whenever we are free，we can do some eye exercises so that our tired eyes can be restored quickly．【高分句型二】（提出視力保護的建議）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給的要點比較多，首先根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當?shù)谋硎静⒘�、遞進、因果或轉(zhuǎn)折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接，力求準確生動、條理清楚．