Question

18．假如你是李華，學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)"有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)"的調(diào)查活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)的情況．并闡述你自己的看法．
Dear editor，
Recently our school has carried out a survey-to whom do you go when you are in trouble？The results are as follows：      ．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表類寫作，要求我們仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫成自己的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)"有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)"的調(diào)查活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)的情況．并闡述自己的看法．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為描述圖表內(nèi)容．第二部分為作者的觀點(diǎn)
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
carry out實(shí)施，執(zhí)行
in trouble處于麻煩中
have a better understanding of 更好的理解
be faced with 面對(duì)
高分句型一：The results are as follows：61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble..此句用了過(guò)去分詞surveyed作后置定語(yǔ)
高分句型二：The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．此句用了that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear editor，
     Recently our school has carried out a survey--to whom do you turn  when in trouble？The results are as follows：61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble（高分句型一）．The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．（高分句型二）22% choose teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences．However，there are also 17% who don't share their troubles at all．They say that their troubles are none of other's business and some of them find it hard to get along with others．（描述圖表內(nèi)容）
     As for me，I prefer to deal with my troubles by myself first．When I am faced with troubles，seeking for various ways to settle is my first step．Because sometimes troubles are not so troublesome or challenging as we expected，they can be solved entirely with my efforts．I do like to experience the pleasure．Of course，sometimes I will also turn to my parents or friends for help if the troubles are not within my ability．（作者的觀點(diǎn)）
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Lihua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧