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【題目】隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)。請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。

1. 借助網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的優(yōu)點：省時；查詢答案方便等；

2. 依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的缺點：導(dǎo)致懶惰；養(yǎng)成不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；

3. 你的建議。

注意：1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100 左右；

3. 開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. Firstly, with the click of a mouse, the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly, which saves them time on schoolwork. Secondly, if they find something difficult, it’s convenient to search the Internet for answers.

However, depending too much on the Internet may bring some disadvantages. With no effort, some students copy online answers, resulting in laziness and bad studying habits. Worse still, it may kill their creative thinking.

In my opinion, we may enjoy the convenience of the Internet, but turn to it for help when really necessary. In brief, we should use it in a reasonable way.

【解析】

試題分析：隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)。請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.借助網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的優(yōu)點：省時；查詢答案方便等；2.依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的缺點：導(dǎo)致懶惰；養(yǎng)成不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；3.你的建議。這是一篇明顯的提綱作文，就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出以進(jìn)行寫作。考生在審題的時候應(yīng)該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài)。題文已經(jīng)告知要求，那么文體應(yīng)為書信文體，即介紹主要行程；又根據(jù)學(xué)生根據(jù)網(wǎng)絡(luò)寫作業(yè)應(yīng)用第三人稱；時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時即可或一般將來時�？忌�在寫作時應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達(dá)出來。表達(dá)時應(yīng)該綜合運用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤。然后根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇。

【亮點說明】本文語言凝練，論點鮮明，條理層次清晰。文章第一段借助網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的優(yōu)點：省時；查詢答案方便等現(xiàn)象；文章第二段就依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的缺點：導(dǎo)致懶惰；養(yǎng)成不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；第三段具體闡釋了自己的體會。文章使用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句which saves them time on schoolwork.（這節(jié)省了他們在作業(yè)上的時間）；動詞ing形式做主語depending too much on the Internet（太多依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)）。高級短語和結(jié)構(gòu)：Generally speaking一般來講，With no effort毫不費力。最后一句使用In brief, we should use it in a reasonable way簡言之，我們應(yīng)該以一種合理的方式使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，給文章一個完美的結(jié)束。