Question

【題目】網(wǎng)絡(luò)上曾瘋傳這么一幅圖“友誼的小船說翻就翻”。從網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的各種配圖來看，導(dǎo)致友誼翻船的原因林林總總。

請以維護友誼為主題，寫一篇150字左右的作文。

要求：1)描述上圖并解釋圖片所傳達(dá)的意思；2)列舉兩到三個導(dǎo)致友誼翻船的原因；3) 就如何維護友誼給出你的建議。

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Answer 1

【答案】Despicted in the picture is a boat which is shared by a pair of friends, but which turns over easily for some reason. This is a vivid metaphor for fragile friendship in reality.

Friendship, indeed, falls apart easily, sometimes even for minor incidents. For example, a dispute over idols or a division of hobbies might well cost one a long held relationship in a single minute. Nevertheless, it is actually lack of trust that is responsible for the loss of friendship. Friends are meant to be trusted, and if the trust between both sides fades away, so will friendship itself.

Despite the fragility of friendship, various means are available to help fix the crack in the bonds between friends. First of all, sincerity is the foundation of friendship, on which trust is likely to develop slowly but steadily. More importantly, frequent exchange of opinions helps friends better understand one another, which in turn strengthens ties between friends.

May the boat of friendship sail well and far!

【解析】試題分析：本文是看圖作文。它是網(wǎng)絡(luò)上曾瘋傳的一幅圖“友誼的小船說翻就翻”。 請以維護友誼為主題，寫一篇150字左右的作文。要求：描述上圖并解釋圖片所傳達(dá)的意思；列舉兩到三個導(dǎo)致友誼翻船的原因；就如何維護友誼給出你的建議。根據(jù)圖畫和提示列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是看圖作文。內(nèi)容符合圖片要求，重點突出，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文章使用高級詞匯和句子。Despicted in the picture is a boat which is shared by a pair of friends句中which引導(dǎo)定語從句；it is actually lack of trust that is responsible for the loss of friendship.此句it做形式主語，that主語從句做真正的主語；if the trust between both sides fades away, so will friendship itself.if條件句和so倒裝句堪稱經(jīng)典；sincerity is the foundation of friendship, on which trust is likely to develop slowly but steadily.介詞加which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；另外，For example, Nevertheless, First of all, More importantly, May the boat of friendship sail well and far!等的運用為文章增色添彩。