Question

16．Children in kindergarten are learning social skills．For this reason，it's important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up．It's up to parents，teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills．
Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground．For example，if a class has to make paper cutouts （剪下的圖樣），after cutting，have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket．
The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age．The rule is"One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself"．Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated．There are many answers，such as not being treated in bad manners．The teacher should explain that others don't like to be scared，so you should not scare others either．
Following the laws is good citizenship．Proper games can be played in the classroom．Games have rules，and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games．If a child doesn't want to follow，it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child．Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need t
o obey the law when they become adults．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1． 以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；
2． 不少城市在創(chuàng)建文明城市．請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞談我們?nèi)绾纬蔀槲拿魇忻瘢?br />內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你認(rèn)為文明市民 （a civilized citizen） 應(yīng)具備什么素質(zhì)，列舉兩三種文明行為；
（2）作為中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀銘?yīng)如何從小事做起，為創(chuàng)建文明城市作貢獻(xiàn)．
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens．
作者指出，教導(dǎo)孩子成為優(yōu)秀公民的技巧是很重要的．
高分句型二：
As a senior high school student，I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life．
作為一個(gè)高中生，我將盡我所能成為我日常生活中的文明市民．

解答 The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens（高分句型一）．Therefore，he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves，to respect others and follow the laws．
As far as I am concerned，a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others．In public places，such as restaurants，stations or hospitals，a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly．Besides，a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands．Last but not the least，a civilized citizen should be aware of the significance of obeying the law．
As a senior high school student，I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life（高分句型二）．For example，I will pick up rubbish on the ground and put it into the dustbin．On my way to school，I will follow the traffic rules．All in all，I will do what I am expected to do．Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本書面表達(dá)為議論文，議論文是對(duì)某現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行點(diǎn)評(píng)．寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)．