Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said, “No, you had another 40 years.”O(jiān)n recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had another 40 years!” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】nearly---near

【2】how--- if/whether

【3】had---have

【4】women---woman

【5】many---much

【6】from---of

【7】在she后加was

【8】speeded---speeding

【9】把in the front of中的the去掉

【10】They---You

【解析】

【1】nearly---near 此處是形容詞修飾名詞，故把nearly---near。

【2】how--- if/whether 句意：她問這是否是它。根據(jù)上下文可知把how--- if/whether。

【3】had---have 這是一個(gè)直接引語，根據(jù)句意可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，“你有過了40年。”故把had---have。

【4】women---woman 根據(jù)前面的A woman，可知是單數(shù)形式，故把women---woman。

【5】many---much time是不可數(shù)名詞，故把many---much。

【6】from---of 固定搭配：make full use of 充分利用，故把from---of。

【7】在she后加was 句意：當(dāng)穿過街道的時(shí)候，她被一輛快速經(jīng)過的救護(hù)車殺死了。此處用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，故在she后加was。

【8】speeded---speeding 此處是現(xiàn)在分詞作定語，表示主動(dòng)，故把speeded---speeding。

【9】把in the front of中的the去掉 到達(dá)God前面，故把in the front of中的the去掉。

【10】They---You 根據(jù)上文提到的God said, “No, you had another 40 years.”可知此處把They---You。

【知識(shí)歸納】

有無冠詞不一樣

in front of 在---前面，in the front of 在---前部；in hospital住院，in the/a hospital在醫(yī)院里；in charge of 負(fù)責(zé)管理，in the charge of 由---負(fù)責(zé)管理；in posession of 擁有，in the posession of被---擁有；by sea乘船， by the sea在海邊。