Question

假設你叫李華，現(xiàn)在是重點高中第一中學的一名新生。請根據(jù)以下提示，給你初中的英語老師王老師寫一封信，表達對他的感謝和尊敬。

詞數(shù)120左右；文章的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wang,

How is everything going?

I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now studying in No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of. _____________________________________________

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,

How is everything going?

I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now studying in No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of. Recently I am always remembering the days when you were with us. Your classes are lively and interesting. My English has improved greatly because of your creative work。

At one time, however, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations from the parents made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to the key school. Thank you for your encouragement and patience; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really appreciate your help. I hope more and more of your students will go to their ideal schools.

Miss you! I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些的常見的短語because of因為； At one time,曾經；too much太多（修飾不可數(shù)名詞）； was tired of 厭倦；have the chance to有機會做某事； realized my dream實現(xiàn)某人的夢想。I am now studying in No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of.這個句子中用which來引導非限制性定語從句。I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to the key school這個句子中that引導warning的同位語從句，同位語從句含有if引導的條件狀語從句。

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