Question

7．假如你是李華，在暑假里，Tom 邀請你到他海邊的家里度假．期間，Tom 一家對你很好，不僅陪你玩，還給你買了許多好吃的，這給你留下了深刻的印象．開學(xué)后，你為了表達(dá)感意，給Tom一家寄去了一封感謝信．
注意：1．感謝信的內(nèi)容，除要求的內(nèi)容外還可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．
                                                                  
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一封感謝信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：在暑假里，Tom 邀請你到他海邊的家里度假．期間，Tom 一家對你很好，不僅陪你玩，還給你買了許多好吃的，這給你留下了深刻的印象 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
I am writing you this short letter to thank all your family for the happy summer vacation I spend in your place．（高分句型一）句中I spend in your place．作定語從句
In those days，not only did you buy me my favorite foods，but also you show me around here and there by car．（高分句型二）句中使用了not only   but  also  句型
To tell the truth，I got a lot from you，and I have to show my appreciation to you for your love．（高分句型三）To tell the truth屬于固定短語

解答 Dear Tom，
      How is everything going？I am writing you this short letter to thank all your family for the happy summer vacation I spend in your place．（高分句型一）Although the new term has began，I can't forget the interesting experience．In those days，not only did you buy me my favorite foods，but also you show me around here and there by car．（高分句型二）I got much happiness there at that time．Especially，your care made a deep impression on me．Each time I think of it，my heart is filled with warmth．To tell the truth，I got a lot from you，and I have to show my appreciation to you for your love．（高分句型三）
     Thank you again and I am looking forward to seeing you again．
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours
                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．