Question

下面是一場(chǎng)健康講座的內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹講座情況。

Last month I attended a lecture delivered by Professor Zhang, a health expert, ___________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Last month I attended a lecture delivered by Professor Zhang, a health expert, with the theme of “sitting for too long is bad for people’s health”. From the lecture I learned that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before in history, which has a bad effect on their health. Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, Professor Zhang suggested that those who sit too much, such as students and office workers, should form some good habits in life, such as going to school or work on foot or by bike rather than by car, taking the stairs instead of the elevator and standing while talking on the phone. He particularly reminded us that we students should stand up to do some activities during break time at school.

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。寫一篇關(guān)于久坐傷身演講的內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介，敘述時(shí)力求言簡(jiǎn)意賅，將題目要求所的內(nèi)容完整地表達(dá)出來，表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)排好主次順序，一目了然。不要逐詞逐句翻譯，適當(dāng)使用連詞使得文章通順流暢。文章第一句with the theme of “sitting for too long is bad for people’s health”點(diǎn)出講座的主題，第二句From the lecture I learned that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before in history, which has a bad effect on their health由that和which引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句，組合成了一串復(fù)合句，承上啟下，提及演講，也將下文即將介紹的內(nèi)容揭示了出來。第三句Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death中 not only …but…不僅……而且…… 句式的使用得十分巧妙，將久坐的危害介紹完畢，句子也注意了部分倒裝的問題。第四句To prevent these problems from happening，不定式做主語(yǔ)，介紹預(yù)防的辦法，such as going to school or work on foot or by bike rather than by car, taking the stairs instead of the elevator and standing while talking on the phone中rather than 和instead of都有表示替換的意思，避免了詞匯重復(fù)，句子也注意了結(jié)構(gòu)一致性，on foot or by bike rather than by car和taking the stairs，standing while talking.最后一句點(diǎn)出教授的后續(xù)觀點(diǎn)，particularly特別的, stand up站出來 詞語(yǔ)的使用比較貼切�？偨Y(jié)：全文流暢簡(jiǎn)潔，沒有多余無用的詞匯，將一篇演講簡(jiǎn)介用各種句式串聯(lián)了下來，避免了簡(jiǎn)單句較多帶來的枯燥無味。

考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文寫作。