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大多數(shù)人都希望受到別人歡迎，但并非都能做到。請根據(jù)下表問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇題為How to be popular的英文短文。

45%的人認為	1、改善外表，穿著得體，精神狀態(tài)好 2、經(jīng)常微笑，待人友善
55%的人認為	1、培養(yǎng)對他人的體貼 2、當(dāng)個好聽眾
自己的觀點	(至少兩點)

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How to be popular

Many people desire to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal．What is the secret to popularity?

Answer 1

How to be popular

Most people desire to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?

45 percent of the people surveyed believe that the first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress properly and be in good spirits. In addition, if we always keep a smile on our face and act in a friendly way towards others, people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our actions.

However, 55% of the people think a person popular with people is always considerate of others. It’s also important to be a good listener. In this way, people will feel comfortable enough to get along with you.

In my opinion, no matter what we do, we are supposed to be ourselves. Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect. Meanwhile, if we are trustworthy, I am sure popularity will come our way.

【解析】

該作文是給材料作文，考生在反映出需要表達的事情的同時，注意語言的使用。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，可以適當(dāng)進行發(fā)揮，同時也不要忘記提出自己的觀點。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點說明】文章第一段是文章的中心段。第一句Most people desire to be popular with others大多數(shù)人們都想要收到別人歡迎，其中連用了兩個句型desire to do something想要做某事、be popular with somebody受到某人的歡迎。 文章第二段第三段闡述調(diào)查結(jié)果。第二段第一句45 percent of the people surveyed believe that the first step is to improve our appearance.調(diào)查中的百分之45人相信第一步是改進我們的形象。這是一個that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，that做believe的賓語。第二句We should always make sure that we dress properly and be in good spirits. 我們應(yīng)該確定我們衣著得體精神飽滿。這也是一個that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，that做make sure的賓語。第三句用了一個條件狀語從句：if we always keep a smile on our face and act in a friendly way towards others, people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our actions.如果我們的臉上總是保持笑容，我們的行為很友好，人們會被我們美好的外表和優(yōu)雅的行動所吸引。其中主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時。第四段提出自己的觀點。第一句no matter what we do不管我們做什么,這是一個讓步狀語從句，no matter what相當(dāng)于whatever。第二句Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect. 這里是only提前的倒裝句。只有對別人尊重我們才能贏得他人的尊重。最后一句也是一個if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。本文中也運用了大量的高級短語make sure 保證、be attracted to be 被吸引、considerate of體諒、It’s important to do。做某事很重要、get along with和…相處、be supposed to被期望…等。同時在文章結(jié)構(gòu)上，作者用了很多連詞，比如第二段的In addition,此外用于闡述新觀點。第三段However,用于引出反面觀點In this way,起順承的作用。最后一段 In my opinion,引出自己的觀點。Meanwhile與此同時。本文運用了大量的從句和短語，連詞用的恰到好處。

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