Question

1．下面的圖表顯示了某校高三學(xué)生周末放假的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況．
Ways to spend the weekend 
 
根據(jù)上圖信息，請(qǐng)以"Ways to spend the weekend"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文． 要求如下：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的信息；
2．說(shuō)明原因 （為了高效學(xué)習(xí)；鍛煉身體；爭(zhēng)分奪秒…）；
3．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：文章標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）
Ways to spend the weekend
 
     As can be seen from the chart，                                                   
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do（1），while（2）25% students choose to study at school during weekends．大多數(shù)學(xué)生回家休息，而25%的學(xué)生選擇周末在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)．
（1）該部分是be動(dòng)詞后what 引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，書(shū)面表達(dá)中選擇從句是常見(jiàn)的高分句型．
（2）while表示"可是，然而"，用來(lái)表示前后之間的對(duì)比和轉(zhuǎn)折．
句型二：
The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends．最少數(shù)量的學(xué)生（約占15%）周末參與戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)；
account for 占據(jù)比例；本句中是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做后置定語(yǔ)，書(shū)面表達(dá)中運(yùn)用分詞做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)總是吸引眼球的高分句式．
句型三：
Only by（1）combining a good  rest with（2）proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life．只有把休息和鍛煉結(jié)合起來(lái)高三學(xué)生才能期待成功的學(xué)校生活．
（1）"only+狀語(yǔ)"放在句首，句子用部分倒裝的語(yǔ)序，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)言的氣勢(shì)，情感色彩強(qiáng)烈．
（2）combine…with把…與…結(jié)合．

解答 Ways to Spend the Weekend
  As can be seen from the chart，senior three students have different ways to spend their weekends．Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do，while 25% students choose to study at school during weekends【句型一】．The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends【句型二】（描述圖表信息）．
  Various reasons are responsible for their different choices．Those who choose to go back home believe that a good rest does help them relax and work more efficiently during the school time．Outdoor-activity lovers hold the opinion that taking exercise is a wonderful way to refresh themselves．However，a small number of students living far away from home tend to stay at school to save every minute to study（分析不同原因）．
  Personally，despite the heavy study pressure，senior three year doesn't necessarily mean studying all the time．Only by combining a good  rest and proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life【句型三】（個(gè)人看法和建議）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)題目的要求審要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)要包括文字中的要點(diǎn)，也要包括圖片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考慮詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用，詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．