6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
l．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
After school，I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin．He looked extremely weak．Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy．So I decided to take him home．I gave him some food and a bath．After the bath he looked energy and refreshed．What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home，I asked that I could keep the dog．To my surprised and joy，they agreed．Up to now，he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company．Looked at the cute and happy dog today，I realize that it was right to help him．I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter．

分析 作者在本文中講述了收養(yǎng)一條流浪狗的故事，如今這條狗已經(jīng)成為他們家庭的一員，給他們帶來(lái)了很多快樂(lè)與歡笑．

解答 After school，I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin．He looked extremely weak．Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy．So I decided to take him home．I gave him some food and a bath．After the bath he looked energy and refreshed．What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home，I asked that I could keep the dog．To my surprised and joy，they agreed．Up to now，he has become∧member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company．Looked at the cute and happy dog today，I realize that it was right to help him．I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter．
詳解：
1．去掉into；考查介詞，enter本身具有"進(jìn)入"的意思，后面直接跟賓語(yǔ)． 
2．lie改為lying；考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，a little dirty dog和動(dòng)詞lie存在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作賓語(yǔ)dog的補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)．
3．of改為with；考查介詞，fill sb with sth 使固定搭配，意為"用…把…填滿"．
4．energy改為energetic；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞形式與后面的refreshed并列作looked的表語(yǔ)．
5．that改為if/whether；考查賓語(yǔ)從句，結(jié)合上下文分析此處要用if/whether引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，意為"我問(wèn)我是否可以收養(yǎng)這條狗"．
6．surprised改為surprise；考查固定短語(yǔ)，to one's surprise 是固定搭配，意為"使某人吃驚的是…"． 
7．member前面加a；考查冠詞，member是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式，前面加a泛指"一個(gè)"．
8．had改為has；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Up to now（直到現(xiàn)在）可知要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故把had改為has．
9．Looked改為L(zhǎng)ooking；考查分詞作狀語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)I和動(dòng)詞look之間是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語(yǔ)．
10．ourselves改為us；考查人稱代詞，此處用賓格形式us作brought的賓語(yǔ)，意為"他給我們帶來(lái)很多快樂(lè)和歡笑"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀短文，把握中心思想，再結(jié)合上下文的語(yǔ)境充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)，固定搭配，詞的變化等多方面進(jìn)行分析判斷，找出錯(cuò)誤加以修改

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