【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

On thanksgiving morning I got up early to run in a race . It was just above freezing. So every runner was jumping around trying to stay warmly.

By the roadside was a man wrapping in a blanket. He was obviously homeless and most people pretended not see him. I went over and talked with him . We talked about all sort of things. It always hurts to see someone going through so a rough time. He didn’t ask me for anything, and I wanted to do something for him. I gave him all the cash which I had. At the first he didn’t want to accept it but I insisted . Then he said something surprised. He said ,’’This has been so nice . Thank you. I hadn’t really talked to anybody for a long time. ” It was he who showed me how to smile through the rough times.

【答案】1. warmly-- warm

2. wrapping -- wrapped

3. +to

4. sort --sorts

5. so--such

6.and --but

7. which -- that

8. the去掉

9. surprised --surprising

10. hadn’t -- haven’t

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，在晨跑的時(shí)候，作者遇見(jiàn)了一個(gè)無(wú)家可歸的人，別人都假裝沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)他，但作者主動(dòng)過(guò)去和他交談，并把自己身上所有的現(xiàn)金都給了他。

第一處：考查形容詞。本句中形容詞warm和系動(dòng)詞stay構(gòu)成短語(yǔ)stay warm意為“保暖”。句意：每個(gè)跑步的人都四處跳動(dòng)，努力保暖。而副詞warmly通常做狀語(yǔ)，所以把warmly改為warm。

第二處：考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。名詞a man與動(dòng)詞wrap構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用過(guò)去副詞短語(yǔ)wrapped in a blanket做定語(yǔ)。句意：一個(gè)裹著毛毯的人在路邊。故wrapping改為wrapped。

第三處：考查不定式。動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)pretend to do sth假裝做某事，它的不定式是在不定式前面加not。句意：很明顯他無(wú)家可歸，但大部分人都假裝沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)他。所以在see前面加to。

第四處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。形容詞all可以修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)修飾，名詞sort意為“種類(lèi)”，這是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，all sorts of意為“各種各樣的”。所以要把sort給我sorts。

第五處：考查固定用法。我們通常在such的后面接名詞或名詞短語(yǔ)，在so的后面接形容詞或副詞。本句中s rough time是一個(gè)名詞短語(yǔ)，所以要使用such替換so。

第六處：考查連詞。句意：他沒(méi)有向我要任何東西，但我想為他做一些事情。上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用but換掉and。

第七處：考查定語(yǔ)從句。當(dāng)先行詞是指物的名詞且有all修飾的時(shí)候，定語(yǔ)從句要使用關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)。句意：我把身邊所有的現(xiàn)金都給了他。所以要把which改為that。

第八處：考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)at first起初；通常表示后來(lái)的情況與最初的情況不一樣。句意：起初他不想要我的錢(qián)，但是我堅(jiān)持要給。所以要?jiǎng)h除定冠詞the。

第九處：考查形容詞。形容詞surprising意為“令人驚訝的”，surprised意為“感到驚訝的”，本句中不定代詞something是指物的名詞，所以使用surprising修飾。故把surprised改為surprising。

第十處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：相信你，我從來(lái)沒(méi)有和任何人交談這么長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間。本句使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)表示到目前為止沒(méi)有和任何人交談過(guò)如此長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間。故把hadn’t改為haven’t。

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