Question

5．假設你是李華，從互聯(lián)網上看到一個國際中學生家教組織將面向中國招聘兼職中文家教（tutor） 的廣告，歡迎中國學生參加． 請寫一封電子郵件申請參加．
內容主要包括：
1．自我介紹（包括中英文能力）；
2．參加意圖（幫助別人學習中文和推介中國文化）；
3．希望獲準．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總次數．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student from China．I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）Iam interested in it．I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job．
For me，Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it．Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well．
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 1．這是一篇提綱作文，內容是寫一封電子郵件申請參加國際中學生組織在美國舉辦的夏令營．
2．電子郵件的主要內容首先是自我介紹及自身英語能力；其次是參加意圖，主要是為了介紹中國以及了解其他國家；最后是表達自己希望獲得批準．
3．注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時，人稱主要為第一人稱．
4．應注意語言的準確性和符合題意性，文章中可能用到的主要詞匯及句型有：be interested in，would like，take part in，What is more，be able to，looking forward to your reply等．
I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）
Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
      I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student from China．I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job．
      For me，Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it．Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well．
      I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours．
      Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．