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4．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改個(gè)，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
    On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She eit her encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．

Answer 1

分析 本文介紹了作者最喜歡的一份14歲生日禮物．

解答 On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's∧hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She eit her encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．
詳解：
1．答案fourteen改為fourteenth．考查序數(shù)詞．根據(jù)句意，第十四個(gè)生日，用序數(shù)詞fourteenth．
2．答案eye改為eyes．考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．in one's eyes為固定搭配，意為"在某人的眼中"．
3．答案hand-made前加a．考查冠詞．其后的notebook為可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，其前必須有表示單數(shù)的冠詞或數(shù)量詞．根據(jù)句意，那是一本手工筆記本，故加上冠詞a．
4．答案that改為which．考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．此處"my best friend Jane gave to me"為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為notebook，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，故that改為which．
5．答案makes改為made．考查時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)前文"Jane gave to me"可知，筆記本是過去送的，也是過去制作的．故makes改為過去時(shí)made．
6．答案for改為of．a(chǎn) picture of sb．某人的一張照片，照片上的人為其本人．for表示"給…"．根據(jù)句意，有一張Jane和我的照片，故for改為of．
7．答案tell改為tells．考查時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)前文的encourages可知，此句話時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，or為選擇連詞，連接兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)，make的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)與encourages一致．故make改為makes．
8．答案touching改為touched．考查形容詞．touching一般指物，意為"令人感動(dòng)的"．touched一般指人，意為"感到感動(dòng)的"．此處修飾I，指人，故touching改為touched．
9．答案wonderfully改為wonderful．考查形容詞和副詞．其后time為名詞，意為"時(shí)光，時(shí)間"，形容詞修飾名詞，故wonderfully改為wonderful．
10．答案：去掉be．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．be動(dòng)詞作謂語(yǔ)表示"有某種屬性"，此處保留禮物，用實(shí)義動(dòng)詞keep．一般將來(lái)時(shí)的構(gòu)成：will+動(dòng)詞原形．故去掉be．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)的題，可記憶口訣：名詞數(shù)、動(dòng)詞形．形副互混辯分明．介詞多用錯(cuò)與少，連詞轉(zhuǎn)折與平行．冠詞錯(cuò)誤常出現(xiàn)，代詞前后易錯(cuò)亂．邏輯錯(cuò)誤偶爾有，認(rèn)真閱讀別遺漏．