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4．"天行健，君子以自強(qiáng)不息"，請(qǐng)你以好朋友的名義，給處于緊張高考備考中的高三學(xué)生李華寫(xiě)一封信，詞數(shù)100左右，鼓勵(lì)他增強(qiáng)自信、認(rèn)真?zhèn)淇迹?br />提示：①適度的緊張是有益的；
②提高效率、勞逸結(jié)合；
③保持樂(lè)觀、自信．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Li Hua，
        ．
Yours，
Xiao ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給處于緊張高考備考中的高三學(xué)生李華寫(xiě)一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：：①適度的緊張是有益的；②提高效率、勞逸結(jié)合；③保持樂(lè)觀、自信． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As your good friend，I want to offer you some advice，which I hope will be somewhat helpful to you．句中使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；What's more，you must pay attention to the efficiency while making preparations．（高分句型二）句中使用了"連詞+分詞"結(jié)構(gòu)；After all，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，as the old saying goes．（高分句型三）句中引用了諺語(yǔ)和as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear Li Hua，
　　I hear that you are getting anxious about the coming college entrance examination （CEE）．As your good friend，I want to offer you some advice，which I hope will be somewhat helpful to you．（高分句型一）
　　You are not alone．To be frank，everyone tends to become a little nervous with the approach of CEE．However，if coped with properly，it can do good to you instead．What's more，you must pay attention to the efficiency while making preparations．（高分句型二） At the same time，do spare some time to relax yourself and never make yourself too exhausted．After all，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，as the old saying goes．（高分句型三）
"A rainbow always appears after a storm．"You are bound to make it as long as you keep confident and optimistic．
　　All the best!
                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                     Xiao ming．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．