Question

假如你叫李華，你的好友李林發(fā)QQ向你詢問(wèn)如何寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示回復(fù)。
收集好詞好句并記憶；
背誦范文；
經(jīng)常練筆。
注意：
可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫；
詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Dear Li Lin,
Glad to recive your message. At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition.
First and foremost, an effective way, to the best of my knowledge, is to collect classic words and sentences, processing them over and over until you bear them in mind. The more vocabulary you accumulate, the more freely you can apply them when writing. What’s more, reciting fantastic possible versions and sentence structures worth imitating can get you to make enough preparations in advance. Last but not the least, it is a good reward to practise writing. Only by exercising can you put to use what you have gathered.
Don’t hesitate to ask for more if you have any questions. Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。題目要求回復(fù)好友李林如何寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文。作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，寫(xiě)作前， 先構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，再依據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)恼归_(kāi)論述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式。
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