Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是佳木斯一中的李華，每年的9月22日是“世界無車日”，請撰寫一份主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.目前汽車帶來的問題；

2.騎自行車的益處。

參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

2.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Hua from Jiamusi No.1 High School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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That’s all! Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Hua from Jiamusi No.1 High School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problem then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us.

That’s all! Thank you!

【解析】這是一片開放性作文。文章只給出了背景以及簡單的提示�？忌�在成文時應(yīng)注意：合理發(fā)揮想象力，使文章的表達自然，豐滿。文章的寫作要點要齊全。注意文章的人稱：以第一人稱為主。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。注意使用高級詞匯和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞、插入語，使文章表達自然，流暢。注意詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

【范文亮點】

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life.由as引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas.狀語從句。

However；As far as I’m concerned；For one thing，F(xiàn)or another；Therefore連詞以及短語的使用。