Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你校將舉辦以“What should I do to Ensure an Eco-friendly World”為主題的英語演講比賽。請給在英國朋友的Peter寫一封郵件告知你要參加這次競賽,要點如下：

1.時間地點；2.參賽原因；3.他的建議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I feel honored to inform you of the thrilling news. I am going to participate in the English speech contest, whose theme is “What Should I Do to Ensure An Eco-friendly World?”

As scheduled, the speech contest will be held on September 30th in the lecture hall of our school. As we know, ecology is to us human beings what water is to fish, but it is worsening, so it is of great necessity to attach great importance to making joint efforts to make our home eco-friendly. Undoubtedly, not only will this activity provide us with the chance to practice my speaking skill, but it will also raise our awareness of environmental protection.

But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts. So would you please share your suggestions concerning it?

Your timely help will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文。

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假如你是李華，你校將舉辦以“What should I do to Ensure an Eco-friendly World”為主題的英語演講比賽。請給在英國朋友的Peter寫一封郵件告知你要參加這次競賽,要點如下：1.時間地點；2.參賽原因；3.他的建議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：inform sb of；participate in；attach great importanceto；make efforts；raise awareness of；look forward to等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。