根據(jù)漢語提示寫一篇短文,介紹你最喜歡的老師,內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)增加,100詞左右。

善良,學(xué)習(xí)上嚴(yán)格要求我們,幫我們克服困難;

容易相處,善于傾聽,是我們的好朋友;

永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記他/她。

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My favorite teacher is Miss Li, who is my English teacher. She is not only kind to us but also very strict with us. When we are in trouble, she is always ready to help us. She often helps us with our homework. However, if we make mistakes, she becomes strict with us. She tells us that learning English is becoming more and more important.

Miss Li gets on well with us. Most of us like talking with her. We could tell her what we think and what we want to do. We also could tell her our troubles, and she likes to listen to us. We all feel that she is not only a good teacher, but also a good friend.

I’ll never forget Miss Li. I hope that she will live a happy life forever.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求根據(jù)漢語提示寫一篇英語短文,介紹自己最喜歡的老師。寫作要點(diǎn)包括:善良,嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生;容易相處,是我們的好朋友;永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記老師。詞數(shù)在100詞左右;注意時態(tài)的正確使用;不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明:

范文涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn),并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣,也注意語句的連貫性;范文還使用了定語從句、條件句、賓語從句、表語從句等語法知識,具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面:定語從句who is my English teacher;時間狀語從句When we are in trouble;條件句if we make mistakes;賓語從句①tells us that learning English is becoming more and more important,②tell her what we think and what we want to do,③hope that she will live a happy life forever;表語從句feel that she is not only a good teacher, but also a good friend等,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用however, and, not only...but also等來銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;短語和搭配方面:范文使用了not only ...but also, be kind to sb, be strict with sb, in trouble, be ready to do, help sb with, make mistakes, get on well with, talk with, listen to等,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。talking with

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