【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改;在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Sometimes 1 feel that living in a city makes people lonely than before. People always feel strangers cannot trusted. They think this is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at anyone. I desire to change that. Last week, while I was skate, a man ran by, smiling at me. He said something to me about doing sports or he hoped to be able to finishing his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And then a family cycles by when I was in the park. One of the girl waved at me with a big smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I do believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.

【答案】1.lonelylonelier

2.trusted前加be

3. thisit

4.skateskating

5.orand

6. finishingfinish

7. certaincertainly

8. cyclescycled

9. girlgirls

10. 去掉into

【解析】

這是一篇議論文。城市生活中人們總覺得陌生人不可信,作者想改變這一點,通過對陌生人微笑這些小動作來改變我們生活的世界。

1.考查形容詞比較級。根據(jù)后面的關(guān)鍵詞than可知,此處應(yīng)該用形容詞 lonely的比較級形式lonelier,故將lonely改為lonelier。

2.考查被動語態(tài)。句意:人們總覺得陌生人不可信。分析句子可知,feel后面的賓語從句中,主語strangers與動詞trust之間為被動關(guān)系,結(jié)合前面的情態(tài)動詞可知,trust前面應(yīng)加be動詞形成被動語態(tài)。故在trusted前加be。

3.考查代詞。句意:他們認(rèn)為主動和任何人說話甚至對任何人微笑是不正常的。此處為“it is+adj.+to do sth. ”結(jié)構(gòu),it作形式主語,真正的主語是后面的不定式短語。故將this改為it。

4.考查現(xiàn)在分詞。句意:上周,當(dāng)我滑冰的時候,一個男人從我身邊跑過,沖我微笑。while引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句中,謂語動詞常用進(jìn)行時態(tài),此處應(yīng)為was+現(xiàn)在分詞構(gòu)成過去進(jìn)行時。故將skate改為skating

5.考查連詞。句意:他對我說了一些關(guān)于運(yùn)動的事,并希望能完成他的跑步。根據(jù)句意可知,此處前后之間為順承關(guān)系,應(yīng)該用and連接兩個句子,故將or改為and

6.考查不定式。be able to do sth意為“能夠做某事”,是固定搭配。故將finishing改為finish。

7.考查副詞。句意:我微笑著回應(yīng)說他一定會的。分析句子可知,would后省略finish his run,故此處應(yīng)該用certainly修飾動詞finish。故將certain改為certainly。

8.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文的時態(tài)可知,此處應(yīng)該用一般過去時。故將cycles改為cycled

9.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。one of后接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù),表示“……中之一”,故將girl改為girls

10.考查介詞。句意:我相信這樣的小動作能改變我們生活的世界。根據(jù)句意可知, change在這里是及物動詞,介詞into多余。故去掉into。

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