Question

假如你是張華， 近日寫信給某英文報的編輯，反映目前人們?yōu)E養(yǎng)寵物的問題，希望得到媒體的關(guān)注和支持。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點：

1.寵物過多，噪音擾民； 2. 污染環(huán)境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被驚嚇或咬傷；4. 傳播疾病。

   注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

         2.信的開頭和署名已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor, Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully,                                                                          Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention.

Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it.

                                                                   Yours truly,

                                                                   Zhang Hua

解析:

文章行文力爭自然流暢，文章要點齊全，意思表達真切。詳略得當，重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說，要使用一些生動的動詞，準確的名詞，同時為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，可以使用時間狀語為連接詞，將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。