Question

16．當(dāng)前，家長普遍認為現(xiàn)在孩子的行為習(xí)慣沒有他們自己小時候的好．請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息寫一篇英語文章，簡單介紹一下這種現(xiàn)象及出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因，并針對這種現(xiàn)象提一些建議．

現(xiàn)象	家長小時候	懂禮貌、尊重別人、循規(guī)蹈矩
	現(xiàn)在的小孩	不樂于助人、不尊重別人、崇尚自由．
原因	1．互聯(lián)網(wǎng)及電視節(jié)目中不良信息的影響 2．家長和老師過分關(guān)注學(xué)生成績，忽視對學(xué)生行為習(xí)慣的培養(yǎng)
建議	（提出至少兩點建議）…

注意：
1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Nowadays，a large number of children have bad manners while their parents behaved well when they were at the same age．

Answer 1

分析 本文需要解決的問題是：對比家長小時候及現(xiàn)在孩子的行為習(xí)慣，說明為什么會出現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在孩子的行為習(xí)慣沒有他們自己小時候的好的原因．
寫作要點是：1，現(xiàn)象；2，原因；3，建議．

解答 One possible version：
Nowadays，a large number of children have bad manners while their parents behaved well when they were at the same age．
When their parents were young，they behaved well，having good manners，respecting others and obeying rules of all kinds．On the contrary，children now are not ready to help others．Actually，they don't show respect for others and they express themselves and behave freely．
The reasons are related to many factors，one of which is the ill information on the Internet and in TV programmes because it has a bad influence on children．Worse still，parents pay too much attention to their scores，ignoring the fact that children's behaviors should be their greatest concern．
        Considering the seriousness of this problem，effective measures should be taken．In my opinion，parents and teachers are supposed to set an example of good behaviors to children as they are role models to them．Meanwhile，the information on the Internet or TV should be under strict control．Only in these ways can we help children develop good behaviors．（152 words）

點評 考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．