Question

【題目】假如你是學(xué)生李華，你的好友Peter對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣，請(qǐng)給他寫封信，邀請(qǐng)他本周六早上和你一起去公園學(xué)習(xí)打太極拳，內(nèi)容包括：

1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、交通方式；

2.簡(jiǎn)介太極拳(如它的好處)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I know you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture and I’d like to invite you to join us in practicing Taiji this Saturday. As you know, Taiji is an ancient Chinese martial art that people practice both for self-defense and its health benefits. It contains a series of movements that are performed at a slow and relaxing pace. Every time I see some people gracefully do Taiji in the park, I’m motivated to learn to do it from them. So some friends and I have planned to go to the City Park this Saturday, where many old people tend to do Taiji. We’ll set out at 7 o’clock at the school gate and cycle to the park.

Look forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封書信：假如你是學(xué)生李華，你的好友Peter對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣，請(qǐng)給他寫封信，邀請(qǐng)他本周六早上和你一起去公園學(xué)習(xí)打太極拳，內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、交通方式；2.簡(jiǎn)介太極拳(如它的好處)。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如；traditional Chinese culture（中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化），martial art（武術(shù)），self-defense（自衛(wèi)），benefit（益處）， movement（動(dòng)作）及gracefully（優(yōu)雅地）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。