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【寫作要求】

活動1		參觀倫敦科學博物館（London Science Museum），了解現代科技和發(fā)明，了解克隆多利羊的詳細過程。
活動2		坐船觀光泰晤士（the Thames）河沿岸數十個歷史文化景點。
活動3		參觀倫敦南部的環(huán)球劇場（Globe Theatre）。建于1599年，客家囤屋（Hakka circular house）形狀，可容納1600人，夏季晚上有一系列戲劇演出。
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Dear Tom,

On hearing that you are planning to tour London this summer vacation. I’d like to recommend something you can’t miss over there.

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Have a good trip and good luck!

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【答案】

Dear Tom,

On hearing that you are planning to your London this summer vacation. I’d like to recommend something you can’t miss over there.

Fist of all, if you want to learn how modern technology is going on as well as how inventions change our life, then you can visit London Science Museum, which also informs you of the detailed procedure in cloning Dolly the sheep. Besides, it’s worthwhile taking a boat trip along the Thames, where dozens of historical and cultural attractions are waiting for your sightseeing. What you can’t overlook is the Globe Theatre located in the south of London. In the shape of a Hakka circular house and built in 1599, it can house 1600 audience and is home to a series of plays in summer evenings.

Visiting these local destinations will surely enrich your trip to London and result in a fruitful yet special vacation.

Have a good trip and good luck!

Tim

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時要根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

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