Question

假如你叫劉云，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉行的“我給市長(zhǎng)提建議”英語(yǔ)作文大賽。目前，你所在
城市已經(jīng)基本實(shí)現(xiàn)城鄉(xiāng)公交一體化。，由此你想到了公交車(chē)司機(jī)們。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下表提示，
用英語(yǔ)給市長(zhǎng)（Mayor）寫(xiě)一封信。

建議	設(shè)立“公交司機(jī)節(jié)”（Bus Drivers’ Day）
背景	l 越來(lái)越多的人乘坐公交車(chē)出行 l 公交車(chē)司機(jī)也隨之越來(lái)越多 l 公交車(chē)司機(jī)服務(wù)大眾，工作辛苦……
時(shí)間	在每年某月某日慶祝
原因	......

【寫(xiě)作要求】
（1）      只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。
（2）      信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入5個(gè)句子中。
Dear Mr.Mayor,
I’m writing to you about starting a Bus Drivers’ Day.
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Buses are playing an important role in our daily life. I hope you can spare your time and think about my idea.   Thank you!
Best wishes!                                  Liu Yun

Answer 1

Now more and more people both in cities and in the countryside are traveling by bus, so more and more bus drivers are working for us. They have to work very hard, from morning till night. It’s not easy for them, especially during holidays. To thank them, I think it necessary to have a Bus Drivers’ Day. It will be good if we celebrate it on October 7 every year, because it’s the last day of National Day Golden Week, and people can celebrate it with bus drivers, even the buses.

試題分析：本文本句簡(jiǎn)單，要點(diǎn)很清楚，表述也不難，考生只需要按照表格的要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行翻譯，本題的關(guān)鍵在于選詞，要選擇一些較好的詞匯來(lái)提升文章的層次，如celebrate等。在陳述原因的時(shí)候可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，可以使用恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：因?yàn)樘峋V類(lèi)作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)的表達(dá)方法，以及要點(diǎn)不能遺漏。本文要使用不同的句式來(lái)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)的意思，如被動(dòng)句，倒裝句等讓文章充滿變化。