Question

17．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter得知你即將高中畢業(yè)，寫信詢問你畢業(yè)感悟．請(qǐng)你用英文給他回信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．收獲與感悟；
2．?dāng)⑹鲭x別之情；
3．對(duì)未來的展望．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭與結(jié)語已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
            ．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給美國(guó)朋友Peter寫一封信，告知他有關(guān)你即將高中畢業(yè)的感悟．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．收獲與感悟； 2．?dāng)⑹鲭x別之情；3．對(duì)未來的展望．
重要短語：graduate from…（從…畢業(yè)），express one's feelings （表達(dá)某人的情感），learned a lot from …（ 從…學(xué)到很多），the three precious years（寶貴的三年），attended the high school（上中學(xué)…），get along well with （與…相處很好），adapt oneself to…（使某人適應(yīng)…），in addition to （除…之外還），made good friends （交好朋友），as independent as （與…一樣獨(dú)立），say goodbye to（跟…說再見），be admitted into（被錄�。�，in future（未來），look forward to sth（期望…）．
【高分句型】
1．For example，when I first attended this high school，I didn't know how to get along well with others．
此處是由"when"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，主句為"I didn't know how to get along well with others"．
2．I can't imagine what I would be like without them．
此處是由"what"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，從句中使用陳述句語序．

解答 Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
As you know，I will graduate from high school soon．At this moment，no words can express my complicated feelings．How time flies!I have learned a lot from studying and living in my school for these three precious years．For example，when I first attended this high school，I didn't know how to get along well with others．【高分句型】What's worse，it took me long to adapt myself to the new environment．But now，in addition to the excellent academic performance，I have made lots of good friends and become as independent as an adult．（收獲與感悟）
Therefore，I feel terribly sorry to say goodbye to my dear teachers and classmates soon．I can't imagine what I would be like without them．【高分句型】（敘述離別之情）Hopefully，I will be admitted into an ideal university and become stronger and more responsible in future．（對(duì)未來的展望）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．