Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades?
The Chinese Education Ministry has urged all the students to participate in the winter long—distance running activity．And now every school is trying to meet the requirements．However, it aroused various arguments among people including education specialists，teachers，parents and students．
Some people say ‘‘yes” to this phenomenon．They think，for one thing，it can make more people care about physical education；for another，running can improve students’ health and promote their learning efficiency so they can have good grades．
While others hold opposite opinions about the activity．They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on what they will achieve in their subjects．Meanwhile，high requirements don’t mean．good health and many can’t do it everyday．What’s worse，some will suffer cold and injuries．
In my opinion，it’s all right for schools to pay more attention to students’ health and carry out the activity step by step．Remember a good body helps make high efficiency．
解析:
文筆要非常流暢，要把握所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明自己對(duì)志愿者工作的理解，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。要用詞恰當(dāng)，表現(xiàn)要比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用要正確。
