Question

15．假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mary想了解你所就讀學(xué)校（Guangming High School）的學(xué)生課外活動(dòng)情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她寫一封電子郵件．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．寫信目的；
2．介紹學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)：
1）活動(dòng)豐富；
2）具體介紹某個(gè)活動(dòng)；
3．詢問(wèn)對(duì)方學(xué)校課外活動(dòng)情況．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
   3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mary，
                                                                       
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱展開(kāi)敘述，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表述．內(nèi)容包括：一寫信目的；二介紹自己學(xué)校的活動(dòng)；三詢問(wèn)對(duì)方的學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)．
高分句型：
1．Our school distinguishes（distinguish表示使杰出，使著名） itself for organizing a wide variety of （a wide variety of 表示"各種各樣的"）activities，which（which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句） contributes to our all-round development．
我們的學(xué)校以組織各種各樣的活動(dòng)而著稱，這樣做有助于我們的全面發(fā)展．
2．This year，with the theme of"Chinese style"，the competition has included （include表示"包括"）many traditional Chinese elements such as ancient costumes，songs adapted from poems．
句子里adapted from 做songs的定語(yǔ)，二者之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
今年，因?yàn)橹黝}是"中國(guó)風(fēng)"，所以比賽包括許多傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)元素，例如古代風(fēng)俗，由詩(shī)歌改編的歌曲．

解答 Dear Mary，
    I have learnt that you are curious about the after-class activities among students in our school．And I'm writing to show you the rich and colorful campus life．（寫信目的）
    Our school distinguishes itself for organizing a wide variety of activities，which contributes to our all-round development．【高分句型一】Among them，the annual singing competition stands out as our favorite，which enjoys widespread popularity among students．We can sign up solo or in teams and some of us even create our own music．This year，with the theme of"Chinese style"，the competition has included many traditional Chinese elements such as ancient costumes，songs adapted from poems．【高分句型二】These all have exerted a profound impact on shaping our character．（介紹自己學(xué)校的活動(dòng)）
    I wonder what activities students in your school are engaged in．I'll be more than grateful if you could share some interesting experiences with me．（詢問(wèn)對(duì)方的學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)）
    I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的體裁一般有三大類：記敘文、說(shuō)明文和應(yīng)用文，具體形式有便條，日記，通知，書(shū)信，人物、事情、情景故事的描寫，看圖說(shuō)話，縮寫，擴(kuò)寫，改寫等．審題時(shí)要審清文體，注意格式上的不同，避免出錯(cuò)．