Question

17．假定你是李華，已經(jīng)在今年的全國中學生英語演講比賽中獲得一等獎．在準備的參賽的過程中，曾得到過美國外教Mr．Smith的幫助．請你給Mr．Smith寫信，要點包括：
1．完成比賽，已經(jīng)獲獎．
2．感謝他的幫助．
3．歡迎他再次來中國做客．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫出．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm Li Hua，your former student in China．I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students．Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so much unforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）I still remember the days when you taught me English．My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work．
If there is a chance，welcome to China，I am looking forward to your coming．
Best regards．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，已經(jīng)在今年的全國中學生英語演講比賽中獲得一等獎．在準備的參賽的過程中，曾得到過美國外教Mr．Smith的幫助．請你給Mr．Smith寫信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：完成比賽，已經(jīng)獲獎．感謝他的幫助．歡迎他再次來中國做客． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：express my thanks to 想…表達感謝；Thanks to 幸虧，由于；be grateful to向…表示感謝；because of由于；look forward to 盼望
I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）
Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so mu chunforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      I'm Li Hua，your former student in China．I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students．Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so mu chunforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
      I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）I still remember the days when you taught me English．My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work．
      If there is a chance，welcome to China，I am looking forward to your coming．
      Best regards．
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．